Need a resume critique

Hi all. 

Currently a senior at a non-target, looking to get into Equity Research. I have had a pretty good application to interview ratio, and getting interviews hasn't been too big of a problem, I want to see where I can improve on my resume.

 

Did you time travel as a Financial Research Analyst? 

Lots of Vertical and Horizontal Lines - try to minimize. It will look more consistent and easier to read through.

I would move "Member of" to under school and make it a bullet point as well as relevant courses. Rename the bottom section (something like - extracurricular activities and other information) and have each of your sections with bullet points of the information. 

Don't underline titles, use italic. Maybe add in the locations above dates.

 

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