****Summer Analyst Resume Critique: Tear Apart***

Hey Reviewers,

I am currently a accounting masters student at a target university looking for a summer analyst position for this coming summer. I am graduating in Dec '11. I am looking mostly at IB positions but also applying to some commercial banking positions as well (kind of back ups). Let me know whatever I can do to improve it. I have been told the bullet points are somewhat long, but I can't figure out how to cut them down anymore. Also, an insight into my chances are also welcomed. I really appreciate your help.

http://www.razume.com/documents/17609

 

Consolidate experience and leadership under one header.

For Economics Society, say how many members it had. Bankers love numbers.

Other than that, I say you would be an odd fit for an analyst position because of the Master's degree among all those undergrad kids.

Really solid resume.

Good luck.

- Bulls make money. Bears make money. Pigs get slaughtered. - The harder you work, the luckier you become. - I believe in the "Golden Rule": the man with the gold rules.
 

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