Make sure the size of your bullet points are the same size and aligned properly down the left side of the page. It looks like some are different sizes and do not line up.

I personally do not abbreviate my months, but if you choose to do so consider using a period instead of an apostrophe or nothing at all (ie, Jan. or Jan)

Where your Education section list the date Apr' 2012, consider labeling this as 'Expected Graduation: Apr' 2012 or Anticipated Graduation: Apr' 2012'.

Change 'Additional Accomplishments' to Interests, Skill, and Awards or something along those lines. Move that long list of awards from your education section down into the last section. Maybe scale down the amount of awards you have in the education section and choose the most relevant ones to include in that spot.

Hope this helps. Good luck!

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