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koske

German techno?? Really?? You're applying to bank not for a residency at the now closed Guverment. More professional and less micky-mouse

- Only time will tell....

Blou

I replaced it with "vinyl record collecting" I collect electronica, jazz etc. It's a genuine interest of mine, I don't see any harm in that.

burlap

You definitely need to fix up those interests....they make you sound ridiculous (no offence if those are your real interests)

mrb87

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German techno...great if you MD will be looking for an ecstasy hookup.

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Blou

Hahaha well its what I produce as a hobby, but I will remove that. Aside from that is there anything else I can improve on? Working experience descriptions etc.

Blou

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Macro Arbitrage

on the bright side, glad u didnt blank out the '416' haha

this resume could use a lot of work. far too many things to point out. i suggest you use the wso resume review service... you really need it.

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jedi3189

Honestly I would just start over. The format looks kind of juvenile IMO. Reminds me of when I tried to break into trading as a junior at a non-target. Needs a lot more black on the page. The content is meh. I would make a list of skills or qualities that you think they're looking for and rewrite every experience to try to sell them on you having those skills

Flyingplane

Agreed with jedi3189, i think you should start over with a focus on what they are actually looking for rather than what you want to show them

Blou

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