IB resume harsh review please !!!
Hi guys, I have completed some modifications on my CV as I am trying to apply for an investment bank internship or a private equity firm. I would like you to be harsh during the review as I want my CV not to be disregarded from the first view. Thanks and Have a nice day.
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don't write down that your gpa is going to be above average. How do you know that? Also, don't write down that your GPA is "good" or "very good." You should include your actual GPA
You might want to consider to erase a few lines to make your resume more anonymous.
Erase that you are fluent in english. Erase that you are proficient in excel and powerpoint.
Are you applying for job in Germany/Egypt/US?
There is an obvious font discrepancy you ought to fix. Expect to get asked why you switched from engineering to finance. Frankly, I don't get it either, did you wake up one day and decide you hated it? You could have avoided the expense of additional graduate education and gone into the workforce in 2011.
So much white space. Why do you have so much education on the top? It takes up like 40% of your resume... I would find a way to restructure this section
weak
Do people put interests on resume? Is it connected to the job as such or the profession?
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