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EDUCATION
School name
Master of Business Administration; concentration in finance Expected: 12/2021
Cumulative GPA: 3.67/ 4.0
Relevant Coursework: Corporate Finance / Management Accounting / Derivatives Markets / Managerial Economics / Strategic Management / Quantitative Analysis for Management

School Name
Bachelor of Talmudic Law Graduated: 07/2018

WORK & LEADERSHIP EXPERIENCE
company name Brooklyn, New York
Investment Analyst/Partner 04/2017 – Current
Perform due diligence on domestic buyers markets, check appraisal valuations and analyze portfolio performance.
Develop real estate investment thesis’ and negotiate below market value prices to achieve the best possible return on investment.
Research value add and TLC opportunities.

School Name Student Investment Fund Newark, New Jersey
Equity Analyst 04/2020 – Current
Performed valuation analyses, including DCF valuation, public trading comparison and precedent transaction comparison, with the Bloomberg Terminal.
Analyzed several pharmaceutical and technology stocks.
Reach out to industry experts for speaking gigs.

SKILLS, ACTIVITIES & INTERESTS
Languages: Fluent in English; Conversational Proficiency in Hebrew
Technical Skills: Microsoft Excel, Tableau, SPSS, Google Suite; Beginner in Python
Certifications & Training: Bloomberg Market Concepts
Activities: School Name Student Investment Fund
Interests: Financial markets, outdoor activities, spending time with family and reading books on existentialism

 

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Under work experience, mention everything as an achievement (with specific figures)

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Remove everything that it is not 100% necessary.

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Career Advancement Opportunities

May 2024 Investment Banking

  • Jefferies & Company 02 99.4%
  • Lazard Freres No 98.9%
  • Harris Williams & Co. 25 98.3%
  • Goldman Sachs 17 97.7%
  • JPMorgan Chase 04 97.1%

Overall Employee Satisfaction

May 2024 Investment Banking

  • Harris Williams & Co. 18 99.4%
  • JPMorgan Chase 10 98.9%
  • Lazard Freres 05 98.3%
  • Morgan Stanley 07 97.7%
  • William Blair 04 97.1%

Professional Growth Opportunities

May 2024 Investment Banking

  • Lazard Freres 01 99.4%
  • Jefferies & Company 02 98.9%
  • Goldman Sachs 17 98.3%
  • Moelis & Company 07 97.7%
  • JPMorgan Chase 05 97.1%

Total Avg Compensation

May 2024 Investment Banking

  • Director/MD (5) $648
  • Vice President (21) $373
  • Associates (91) $259
  • 3rd+ Year Analyst (14) $181
  • Intern/Summer Associate (33) $170
  • 2nd Year Analyst (68) $168
  • 1st Year Analyst (205) $159
  • Intern/Summer Analyst (146) $101
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