Destroy this attempted S&T Cover Letter Please!

Hello all,

I'm currently applying for S&T spots with a few years out of university already. I've checked with the BB/IB's that are fine with me not being a very recent graduate and will be applying to them. I was in audit and trying to make the switch.

I have basically looked at the "Who we are looking for sections" and tried to relate it back to my past experiences.

I would be extremely grateful if anyone could critique this in their spare time.
Thank you in advance for any feedback

http://www.razume.com/documents/14012

PS: I am based in Australia, if it is relevant

 
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